Poppy and Sam were bored . They had been travling in the car for what seemed like hours . Finaly they arrived ,the building was as big as 2 bloks of flats stood side by side . Sam bounced out of the and legged it throught the car park to get to the water park . Before they got into the park they got changed into there swim suit they did it pretty quick . First Sam and Poppy que for the water slide. But suddenly the slide broke down someone was still on it what were they going to do now??
By Alison in 5H
The Water park Disaster
October 15th, 2009 · 7 Comments
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1
Lucy
// Oct 15, 2009 at 8:46 am
Well done Alison this is a great piece of writing.
2
chloe tedde
// Oct 16, 2009 at 2:14 am
i like your story alison!!!
3
Lauren Ives
// Oct 16, 2009 at 4:36 am
Thats a great story Alison!!
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Joshua Blastland
// Oct 16, 2009 at 4:50 am
well done i like this
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James Jackson
// Oct 19, 2009 at 12:12 pm
SPELLINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CALL THE POLICE NE NAR NE NAR
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James Jackson
// Oct 19, 2009 at 12:21 pm
i carnt speel tto godd eitherr
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Lauren Ives
// Oct 20, 2009 at 12:42 pm
I thought it was ne nor ne nor??
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