On a cold and snowy night Sarah ,Tom and Jack were getting ready to go to bed because tomorrow was Christmas and they were all dying to open their presents rapped up in colourful Christmas paper. All the children were tired so they slowly walked to their bedrooms. Jack was fast of tom and Sarah wasn’t. They stayed up playing with Jacks dinosaurs untill they went to sleep. Before they went to sleep they properly checked all the presents. When they woke up they heared a loud scream they rushed down stairs and saw all the presents GONE!!!!
to be continued…..
hoped you liked my story
by Phoebe Herd
6 responses so far ↓
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Lucy
// Oct 15, 2009 at 8:51 am
cool story but who wrote it?
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chloe tedde
// Oct 15, 2009 at 12:15 pm
i like your story but who wrote it that is whierd there was present then in the morning they where gone!!!!!!!
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phoebe herd
// Oct 16, 2009 at 4:37 am
if your wondering about who this is by
the story is by phoebe in 5h
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Lauren Ives
// Oct 16, 2009 at 4:39 am
Nice story!!!!
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chloe harvey
// Oct 16, 2009 at 4:55 am
i think it is great phoebe and roald dahl will be really pleased so well done i carn’t say how clever i think you are !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please will you give me some tips thank you and well done
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James Jackson
// Oct 19, 2009 at 11:57 am
-yawn- what have i just missed?
lol only kidding good storie
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